727 Practice 12-3-17 (go to word search for thematic similarities)

What a lovely little dollop of paradise!

A cozy, quilt-covered cuddling
with my lovely lady love,
a blue-sky Sunday morning slumber
before the Monday spike
in the worlds heart rate
buries this sweet moments gift
under blankets of blood and business.

Heaven,
I believe,
will be an eternity spent
swaddled in loves silks and cashmeres,

(somewhat analogous to retirement:)!

A pleasant metaphor for Sabbath:
a once a week retiring from the rat race,

practicing for eternity.

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About Ken Greenman

Married and Happy. Retired and busy. Living in NC. 71 and counting. December 12, 2025 and it's 77! ... I would love some written comments, critiques, adulation or kind suggestions.... If you have the time and or inclination, please feel free! Not in fear but by faith. We will see. See you later! If you ever want to talk for real, email me and I will send you my cell number.... I am enjoying this!
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