461 Dots on a line July, 2012

A line is a series of connected dots
stretching out to the left and right.
I am a dot.
I am a guy, an older guy than before.
To my right on the line is another guy,
a father but who acts like a kid, sometimes.
He is still making himself.
He is 31.
The dot nearest me on my left is another guy,
64,
bald also, but a little bit more,
accepting of not being 63, anymore.
Just right of me is a guy, 62,
worried about not being 31 anymore,
but less now than before, thank God!
Way out on my left is a guy, 94,
facing the growing darkness to his left,
wondering, hoping, praying, being brave.
We’re all just guys on the line,
trying to cross our T’s,
dot our i’s,
preparing to close our eyes
for the period
at the end of our sentence.

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About Ken Greenman

Married and Happy. Retired and busy. Living in NC. 71 and counting. December 12, 2025 and it's 77! ... I would love some written comments, critiques, adulation or kind suggestions.... If you have the time and or inclination, please feel free! Not in fear but by faith. We will see. See you later! If you ever want to talk for real, email me and I will send you my cell number.... I am enjoying this!
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